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Touching the sky by ~marsatas:iconmarsatas:



I was laying, on the cold, blood drenched battle ground, looking at the blue sky the sun was rising, and I began to think that this is my last sunrise.
Sad thoughts began filling my head, was I of any use, or did I again got myself needlessly hurt.
I felt like a piece of shit on the ground, alone, ready to die, knowing that I nearly killed the most, dear person to me.  But then, they came, the people that I was trying to help so much, the most important of them kneeled down near me, Hinata, the girl that I fell in love with, when I first appeared in here, she was kneeling and looking at me with eyes full of sorrow. The dying became even more painful.
I just couldn’t die now, I had to say something good, something beautiful, maybe I should confess, yes, I think those would be the best words now.
- Hinata, you are so shy, beautiful and caring for your friends, you would do anything to help them, ahh ill miss those eyes of yours and that shy smile.
- W-what, d-don’t worry you will see them again, the help will be here soon, we don’t let our friends die this easy.
At that moment, those were the nicest words I could hear. I stretched my arm towards the sky and thought, if you lie down on your back and stretch your arm towards the sky, it looks like you can touch it, feel it, but when you try to do it  you realize that it’s impossible. And as I think that I will have to leave all the important people, there is only one thought in my head, only one wish.
- Hinata, - I said again, - come closer, I want you to hear my last words.
- They wont be your last, don’t say such stupid things, - she came so close, that I could see the reflection of my eyes in her eyes.
- All the things that I said, those things are the reason that I fell in love with you.
I was happy, I didn’t care if she accepts my feelings or not, I was just happy that I said them to her.
That’s it, now I can leave this world full of love and sadness. I took a big last breath and died with the rising sun.
©2007-2009 ~marsatas
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OMG, I thought this was long gone, oh shiz. Anyways, people who wills tuble opon it, I would advise you Not to read it, because I did a remake, and well this is basicly an unfinisehd story :/. So this is the [link] for the new remake.
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Well there it is, my first fanfic, its not something special. And its kinda hard too understand, becouse the action begins from the midle, this is those tipe of stories that begin in the midle, and when the story progreses it explains about what happend(or something like that) meaning if this will be of any good ill poost in the next part :)

I was inspired to do this by ~Great-C, he said, that i should give it a go, well i did :)
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That was great, mate. Glad u did it =D

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