Came form nowhere and going nowhere, without reason, without hope. A person who once was somebody is now nobody, even he himself does not know who he is. Usually such people dont live long.
This is a story about a teenager who has been given such a life, but unlike the others who were reborn like this, he has a an undying hope to survive, to live, the power to spit destiny in the face (even thou all this stuff sometimes brings him even more trouble), thats why, he will a life like no other.
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- Aghh, my head hurts, how big is this forest, damn trees, there is just no end for them - I was walking in this forest for a few hours now, searching for a something, maybe some people or maybe, just a way out of this forest!
My prayers were about to be answered, as single accident was about to bring me to life that I have newer imagined a life filled with all the joys and misfortune of the world.
- Hmm, this is pretty tall hill, I think I should go the other way around, again. Wha
ahh, another tree root. Let go of my leg! LET GO! crack Man I hope that wasnt my leg, ok, its not, - I didnt really took notice of in which direction I was pulling, all I wanted was too pull my stupid leg out, but I guess its pretty obvious where I fell, - Woah, no falling down, no, no, no, aaaaaa.
Rolling down from a mountain full of jagged rocks, unable too cling to anything, helplessly falling down the hill, sometimes only catching a glimpse of a tree that could save me. But by the time I try to reach it, its always too late. Only a few trees on the hill and I still get the luck to get hit by them instead of being able to grab them with my hands.
I could already see the end, not of my life of course, the end of the hill, with soft green grass at the end of it, oh how nice it will be to lay down in such green heaven
- oh no, a wooden fence, aaaa crash
- cough cough Damm this hurts, there just had to be something bad, before the green goodness, I think Im bleeding from somewhere, man this day is getting better and better, first the hill, then the falling and now a wooden fence
wait
how did got on that hill in the first place.
- Emm
excuse me
who are you? asked a friendly yet scared voice.
- What, who,- a girl about 15 to 16 years was standing inform of me, hmm she looks nice, pretty too. Just what am I thinking at a time like this.
- Who are you?
- Im
Probably
I think
- Fall from the hill probably hurt my brain, undoubtedly crashing down into the wooden fence had its effect.
- Who is this person, - a les friendly voice asked.
- Oh father. I dont know who he is just
- Why are you bringing people you dont know to our back yard?!
- Wait, wait. Its my fault, I suddenly dropped in, literary
- Mmm?
- I accidentally fell from the hill and
- Well that explains, why you look like this and it also explains, why the hell is my red wood fence destroyed, So who are you?
- I definitely do look like someone who fell down from a hill. Heh
hm
But I think I couldnt tell you who I am even I wanted too, since I cant even remember what I was doing up there.
- What about family, friends or a place where you live?
- Nope nothing.
- Hnn, a troublesome one fell in, - grinded the man, apparently he is the girls father, they do look alike the eyes and so on, - I guess theres no helping it, could you take him to the hospital.
- Yes, of course, father. Umm, lets go.
- Ok, let me just
.., - The world suddenly started spinning around at full speed.
- Hey whats wrong with you?
I could still hear the voices of the girl and her father, but they seemed to be getting further and further away. I no longer cared why I cant remember anything or who are these people, I was gently falling down like white beautiful feather, deeper and deeper into the soft mushiness of joy.
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Ahh, the joy of being unconscious, there is no pain, no nothing, there is just you and the puffiness of the surroundings, everything is white, the sun is shining from somewhere and warming your body, I guess you could call it heaven.
That was one strange dream, but somethings even more stranger. When I opened my eyes almost nothing changed, I was in a white place, white sealing, white bed, white floor, the sun was warming my body through somewhere, just like in heaven
wait.
- Oh F**K, I DIED!!! - then a girl ran in and opened the curtain around my bed.
- Whats wrong! I heard a scream?
- I DIED, DIDNT I!!
- No, no your not dead, your just in the hospital. said the frightened girl.
- Huh, really. God I thought that I died. But how did I get here, I remember the hills then falling, the fence, oh yeah, I crashed into your back yard
Umm, sorry, I didnt want to destroy it.
- Dont worry, the fence will be fixed soon
- But I still dont understand how did I get here, after the talk with your father, all that I remember is falling into a soft mushiness of joy.
- Soft mushiness of joy. You fell on a large, sharp rock which
well
stabbed you.
- Really, where?
- Umm
well
In your butt blush.
- Oh
cough
- still blushing
- You said I was in the hospital, exactly where is this hospital?
- Its in the hidden Leaf village, or you can just call it Konoha.
- Leaf village, Konoha?
- Its a ninja village?
- I
have no
Idea, what your talking about.
- How should I explain
- As less information as possible.
- Lets see. Too keep it short. Konoha is a hidden ninja village, the ninja are also sometimes called shinobi, we take all sorts of missions from other people and when we finish them we get paid. There are five different levels of ninja. The first are academy students, they are pretty much not ninja, they are only ninja in training. Next there are genin, genin are usually the weakest of ninja, but there are exceptions. Then comes the chunin, they on a higher class, therefore they are allowed to lead a mission. Almost the strongest ninja in the village are jounin, they have exceptional skill and sometimes become a sensei of three genin. And the last are anbu, they are the special forces of Konoha and work directly under the Hokages orders. Oh and before you ask, Hokage is the leader of the village, the strongest and most respected ninja of the village.
- I see, I think. So are you a ninja too?
- Yes.
- I dont mean to be rude, but what kind of a ninja are you?
- You mean the level, Im a chunin.
- I see.
- You seem tired, maybe you should go to sleep?
- Oh, dont worry about me. Im sorry, but, could you tell me your name?
- Its Hinata. Hinata Hyuga
- Thats a pretty name.
- Oh
Thank you, and what about yours.
- Mine, I wish I could tell you, but I just got no idea.
- You dont remember?
- I hardly remember anything.
- Thats sad. But how am I supposed to call you then.
- Hmm. Why dont, you, give me a name.
- What!? Me, should you pic somebody els
- No. Your perfect. Your are the only person I know right now, and the first one that I met.
- Well then, its pretty simple, but what about
umm
Dark.
- Dark, why Dark.
- Because you have black hair.
- I have hair!
-
- And its black!
-
- I so need to look at myself in a mirror.
- I can bring you one.
- No, no, you dont need to. Youve already done more that anyone else.
- Yeah, since you dont know anyone else.
- Haha, you are so right,- That moment I saw a smile on her face, and It made me happier, even if it took only a few seconds.
- So should I get you something?
- No, no, nothing. Uu, Im starting too see stars again, I think I should go to sleep for now, - and with those words I once again fell into the soft mushiness of joy.
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While I was enjoying the mushiness of the dream a yellow haired teenager was running though the village with his usual cheerful, energetic smile. Just as he was about to pass through the residence of Hyuga, a tall man came out and stopped the boy.
- Your one of Hinatas friends arent you, - asked the man nervously.
- Yes sir.
- Could you go to the hospital and tell her to come home its been two days already.
- Two days of what?
- Shes babysitting some strange kid, who accidentally destroyed my red wood fence, in the hospital. So can you go there and tell her to finally go home.
- Yes, of course.
Such small errands were no problem for the boy, and since he had nothing better to do, he gladly agreed to visit the hospital.
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knock knock Someone was at the door, I tried opening my eyes to see something, but it was hopeless, all I heard were the voices of Hinata and somebody else.
- N
Na
Nar
.
- Hi Hianta, I came to pass you a message from you father, he wants you to return home, hes worried since youve been here already for two days.
- I see, I guess I should go home then, Um could you look after him until he wakes up, since hes got no memory what so ever I think its dangerous to leave him alone like this.
- Ok, Ill look after him until he wakes up, you should hurry now.
- Thanks Na
I couldnt hear anything else, because I started seeing stars again, I couldnt see them, but I knew that they were definitely there. And so I passed out again, to the not so mushy, anymore, dream.
When I woke up, I was finally able to open my eyes, not only that I started feeling the pain, they probably had given me some painkillers, when I was brought here. As I turned left I was a yellow haired guard sleeping in the chair.
- Hey! I yelled a little.
- What! Who! started shouting and waving hands the yellow haired kid as he was falling backwards with the chair crash
- Are you ok.
- Ah man, that scared me.
- Sorry, I didnt mean to scare you.
- Dont worry, Its my fault for falling asleep.
- Who are you?
- Im Naruto Uzumaki the future Hokage, - shouted proudly the teenager, - And you are.
- Well, since few a hours ago, Im Dark.
- The name fits you. You look kind of pale and dark.
- Why, thank you, - I tried to pull myself up to a more of a sitting position, but once I sat on my butt, intense pain ran though it.
- OW!
- What wrong?
- My butt hurts.
- Hahahahahahahahaha, - started laughing the kid.
- Its not funny, I cant sit.
- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, - started laughing the yellow haired teenager even harder, nearly choking,- HAHAHA, cough air cough HAhaha
ha.
- Finished?
- Yeah, sorry about that.
- Listen I have a question for you.
- Yeah.
- How long have I been here.
- As far as I know it seems this is the third day.
- So shes been here all that time?
- Who. You mean Hinata.
- Yeah.
- She was, she seemed pretty worried.
- But I dont understand, Im just some guy who fell of a mountain, why would she care so much for a complete stranger. Im nobody.
- First Hinata is a very sweet person, she cares for everybody and Im not surprised that she cares for a guy who fell from the mountain to her. Second, your not nobody, you have a name and there are people who care about you, that means your not a nobody.
- I guess so, - hmm, he seems to be a very nice person too.
- By the way?
- Yeah.
- You said that you fell from a mountain, but when I met Hinatas father, he mentioned only the part about his red wood fence.
- Yeah, I kind of destroyed it, when I fell from the mountain.
- Ha, seems Hinatas father cares more about his fence, then about you.
- Haha, - for some reason that was funny and I fully understand him, Id be angry too if someone destroyed my fence.
Our laughter was interrupted when a man wearing a mask appeared out of nowhere in cloud of well cloudiness.
- You are to report to the Hokage, for more detail inspection, - said the masked man, and disappeared again, leaving only cloud full of cloudiness.
- Who was that?
- It was one of the Anbu, I though that the Hokage would be interested in the person who dropped out of nowhere in our village.
- So that was Anbu, I see. Umm, but I dont really know where this Hokage lives or works.
- I will take you there and when were done there Ill show you around a little.
- Ok.














Comments
Also your method for denoting speech, thoughs and sound effects are a bit out. I personally prefer someone to talk within speech marks "Hey there, i'm talking to you" and I prefer to stick thoughts in itallics and speech marks. "Damn i'm thinking aren't I?" and a sound effect should be used in a description.
The tree branch came free with a snap, he only hoped it wasn't his leg
You see what I mean here? it makes a story more aesthetically pleasing
I hope this was some help, and don't feel bad, I made basically the same mistakes myself when I started reading.
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